T-rebel's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Girl]

Ominus and Awesome

That child's face seems to know things it shouldn't at such a young age. I get the feeling that this child blames me for her circumstance. Something about the background (maybe the direction of the lighting and the red?) suggests imminent danger.

It's very discomforting, but very well executed.

[black horse and the cherrytree]

Panties from an Alternate Dimension?!

So 99% of this picture has a crayon or coloured pencil drawing feel to it, but the panties are really solid and untextured. In this context, it makes them look like they're a rigid plastic object. For example, compare the bow on your panties to the ones in your hair; they look like they came from two separate works. Also, your skin shadowing is fairly gentle along your nose, thighs, under your breasts and along your neckline, so why is the collar bone so abrupt?

I know the review sounds critical, but I should end by saying that I really love the style you went with. Also, the facial expression is great; shy eyes with a palyful smile; very natural looking. On the whole, I think you did a great job on this.

[Western Chibi Moon]

Nice work!

Awesome torso & hair. Those damn schoolgirl shirts were always the bane of my existence, so congrats on a job well done there. The coif's got a perfect "droop" to it, so that it looks light but not fake.

but those sausage legs kinda throw me... I don't know how I would have done them differently exactly, but somehow those just stick out as awkward to me. The only vague suggestions from me would be to make them a bit thinner and shorter, and to bring the knee caps a bit higher (or make the boots longer up the legs?).

[Self Portrait 2.0]

Hard to rate properly...

It's hard to rate self portraits when you don't know what the self looks like. Still, I have a few small nit-picky comments.

I think your left shoulder seems a bit broad, and that only your right eye needs shading below the eyebrow (I think that would help convey that your head is turned one way while you're looking the other). I think you need a slightly darker tone for the shaded parts of your skin. Also, the matte pastel background you went with at the bottom kind of obscures your torso's outline.

7/10 for the penmanship, but I'll make it 8 since it must have taken a lot of confidence to put a semi-nude self-portrait online.